You can definitely chill out to it, it's rather lovely, only criticism would be that it gets a bit repetitive after a bit, it would be nice if the melody went somewhere else occasionally I think.
You can definitely chill out to it, it's rather lovely, only criticism would be that it gets a bit repetitive after a bit, it would be nice if the melody went somewhere else occasionally I think.
I like this a lot. It would obviously benefit greatly from being played live to give it some ebb and flow and dynamics, but the actual tune is great.
Would love to hear it played live :D
Perfect fir for something
I like it a lot, it could definitely find a home as the soundtrack to various things.
Things of a disturbing nature...thanks!
Awesome feel
This has an awesome feel to it, really like the mix.
I'd probably mix the drums up a little more, not a lot by any means, but just a little here and there.
Reminds me of Ben Folds
You do have a good voice and the backing vocals are great. The put it in the microwave hook is too hooky and too often for me personally but that's not to say it's a bad thing. Keep writing tunes and people are sure to listen and enjoy :)
I like it a lot
I like it alot, but I've got to agree with some of the comments about the singing, occasionally it creeps out of tune. and I don't really like the elongated caaaaaaaalling faaaaaate part either, it feels like the vocals pops out of the tune a little too much. Overall though I like the vocals and the whole thing
I think some of the issues are probably a mix problem rather than an inherent issue.
Thanks for your input. I disagree that the singing goes out of tune. But thanks again.
Awesome
The piano parts are great. Personally I like the voice on it, it works really well.
No suggestions for improvements, it's great
Interesting...
ideas but feels like there's too much going on sometimes, with some of the instruments meshing in a not so pleasing way.
Also, sometimes I eat sandwiches.
The first 10 seconds...
made me think of a michael jackson tune, but then after that it didn't... I think I'd like it more only it doesn't loop well at all.
You should do something with the intro though, I like it.
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